Wednesday, 10 November 2010

More Film Treatment!

The Script

(Scene opens with Richard lying on the floor. He breathes in heavily and begins to cough and splutter. He sits up disorientated and breathing heavily.)
Richard: Wha-…(coughs) where am/I?
Puppeteer: Welcome to my little playhouse Richard Heartly.
Richard: How do you know…
Puppeteer: Awh he looks scared (laughs menacingly).
Richard: What…what do you want from me? Why am I here?
Puppeteer: Complete the challenge you see right here, match the keys to the lock, or you will suffer a fate worse than death as you race to beat the clock.
Richard: I won’t/ do it
Puppeteer: But otherwise the whole world will know your little secret…remember that? Good luck
Richard: Wait…but…oh god…ok…
(Music starts)


Narrative techniques
  • Narrative retardation-the identies of the puppet master and the apprentice are very much concealed
  • Deadlines-he must complete the challenge before the time runs out
  • Principle of concealment-the identities of the villans of the piece and what is behind the door? Does it lead to his freedom or another challenge? Will a secret be revealed? Is the door anything important?
  • Mis-direction-you do not know where he is (we are not told where this room is or what leads on from it)
  • Morally complex characters-why is our 'victim' even in this situation in the first place?

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